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賽車是一種極為危險的運動. 從一方面來說,這種運動本來就危險,因為這種競賽的主要目的在於追求高速度. 從另一方面來說,這些參賽者似乎又特別喜歡這種危險. 更糟的是,意外事故經常發生並造成重大傷亡. 每年都有一些駕駛人在這類意外事故中喪生. 有時候甚至還殃及維修人員及觀眾. 因此, 就我個人而言, 我反對賽車. 對那些尋求刺激或冒險的人而言, 爬山及游泳等活動應大可滿足他們的需求.

Car racing is a kind of extremely hazardous sports. On the one hand, this sport is risky from the beginning, for the main purpose of this competition is to pursue high speeds. On the other hand, these racers seem particularly to like this type of dangers. What's worse, accidents often happen and cause serious casualties. Every year there are some divers dying in such accidents, and sometimes even the repairmen and spectators get injured. Thus, in my opinion, I disapprove of car racing. Activities such as climbing and swimming should content their needs of those who seek excitements and adventure.