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優良事蹟
Outstanding Performance
表現精湛! 出類拔萃!
恭喜你獲得榮耀的冠冕,昌平全體為你欣喜喝采。
願你珍惜此特殊的榮耀,繼續保持佳績,追求卓越未來。
Masterly behavior ! Top-notch !
Congratulations , you are on this Crown of glory , the Chang Ping all cheer for you .
Hoping you would cherish this special achievement , keep up the success and strive for the excellent future.

..by Still Liou

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Michael Wen 2015-04-26 12:42:12

Outstanding Performance = 優良績效或演出

"表現精湛! 出類拔萃"有很多英文字都可以，如:excellent, outstanding

Michael Wen 2015-04-26 12:44:21

恭喜你獲得榮耀的冠冕,昌平全體為你欣喜喝采 = Congratulations on getting the recognition. 昌平全體 are happy for you.

"榮耀的冠冕" 是指獎狀之類的嗎?

Michael Wen 2015-04-26 12:45:23

Crown of glory = 抽象的榮耀的冠冕

Michael Wen 2015-04-26 12:46:38

願你珍惜此特殊的榮耀,繼續保持佳績,追求卓越未來= We hope you will cherish this achievement and keep up the great work.

Still Liou 2015-04-26 19:48:26

恩恩謝謝你的回覆~ 這次的翻譯主要是要用在小學的獎狀上的